Chapter Four (Part One)

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Remidii

I feel like the mistakes in this chapter have taught me some good lessons on what not to do in storytelling... lol. The flow of the story in these parts is not good, in my opinion. Here is the story I promised you all about why I drew chapter four before chapter three. https://docs.google.com/document/d/14_m8AcwNNC_k_-9CjYWsGn6ZOcOVesdSgL6QGwBJvf8/edit?usp=sharing