So many people have been asking about why the end of chapter 22 seems to connect poorly with 23. This is because, as some of you might have heard, I plan quite poorly. chapter 23 was going to be cut and 22 was supposed to lead into 24. I ended up keeping 23 last minute since I felt like it turned out kinda decent and people would probably enjoy it. what do you think, did you all enjoy 23?